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More Superior Than You Cover (Remake) by Fishlover More Superior Than You Cover (Remake) by Fishlover
:bulletgreen:First Page: fishlover.deviantart.com/art/M…
:bulletyellow:Previous Page: THIS IS THE COVER!
:bulletred:Cover That Leads to the First Page: THIS IS THE COVER!
:bulletpurple: Suceeded By: fishlover.deviantart.com/art/A…

Um, I was in dire NEED for a remake/update/revamp/whatever for this comic, because the old cover did not fit with the art quality of the comic in general. (423 freckle-less, noooooo.) Plus, I’ve practiced a bit with drawing Rayquaza, and even though he still sucks, it’s better then the last cover :P Please tell me it's pretty.

If you're curious.... here's the old cover from 2012: fishlover.deviantart.com/art/M…

Now I gotta go back and update all links in 61 pages X)

Full Synopsis:
The story of 321 and 423. 423 returns to earth after her trainer passes away, and lands in Psybemu, she is paired with 321 as a partner. They start their lives together without any interaction, and during that time 321's mother passes away. When the female Superior 77 dies from old age in her sleep, the male leader 83 resigns his position as Superior. The fight on Psybemu is on for the position and 423 and 321 unintentionally win. While they adjust to life as Superior, they tend to break a lot of 'superior social norms' along the way. 423 learns to handle the strain of her new role as leader of the planet, while 321 learns to love and handle his emotions. Together they try to bring peace to Psybemu, after the 'Dark War' lowers their species population numbers. They try to make peace with their former enemies; something that previous Superiors before them, failed to do years ago...

Pokemon © Nintendo
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Toon-Risu Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't you mean "more Serperior than you"? Oh wait, no, that's a Rayquaza. =P
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SuperMarioFan65 Featured By Owner May 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Looking great
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UmbrotheUmbreon Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This comic cover is much better than the previous one.

For starters, there is more to it. In your previous cover it felt more like it was just gonna be a fight with Rayquaza, and that would be what the comic would be centered around. In this comic cover, you can tell it's much more than a simple fight.

Yeah, Rayquaza definitely looks better here than in the previous comic cover. The others also look pretty good, so no real complaints in regards to that (but I suck at art so I couldn't tell ya what's wrong anyway X3). The one thing that puzzles me is why the two Jjirachi are not with each other, and instead are separated by the Starmie.

Overall, it looks great x3 A severe improvement over your previous page for sure
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Staremprezz Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student General Artist
Rayquaza has teeth? :o
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IllusionsMaster64 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
It's N0t Pretty...It Is Freakin B0ss 0w0
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gamergir8 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
Awesome! :D
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Hebi95 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
It looks awesome Meow :3 
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togepi1234 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Student General Artist
Now THIS looks badass
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AHappyOreo Featured By Owner Edited Apr 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You really went all out on this didn't you :3. I really do enjoy the way you did the cover and so many characters! OMA! Montaro and Yeezma I recognize, but the others....I wonder how you're going to introduce them all. Perhaps a montage? Yes? A conference? Oh! Almost forgot, Rayquaza does look pretty, pretty nice indeed. Clap 
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SecminourTheThird Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Certainly an improvement over the old one, Rayquaza looks less...well, less derpy. Looked a bit derpy in the original but was still a fair attempt.
The front view of the muzzle reminds me of something...
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