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Pinkie seems excited about this. As for Dos, being too nervous has made him feel sick. Pinkie better make some room for him... fast.

I really love how this came out! Advanced critique please!
I may even use this as a sig x3

Tree brushes © *redheadstock
Dos and Pinkie © me

Critiques


:icongeneraloctavious:
I really like this!

I agree with the first critique, though. The trees could use a little more color, there's a little too much shading on Dos, and most veils are see-through (although having hers be that way could have been your own taste).

But other than that, every thing looks fine. :nod:

I love how you did on the coloring and shading. The flowers on Pinkies veil and in her bouquet really make the picture pop. The shading around their eyes makes them look more 3-D.

The idea is timeless, original, and cute. The bride being excited, groom being scared sick. But you seemed, somehow, to have added your own twist to it.

I like it!
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:iconpsychic-girl:
The tree's could use some color.

but that's the only thing I see wrong with this, otherwise, I love it, the sky is my fav part of the background. and poor DOS XD MAKE ROOM PEOPLE!


Pinky looks lovely too. ^^ too bad she's oblivious to the fact DOS is too nervous. The other thing I want to point out on the tree's is they're like ghosts, I suggest using better brushes, or color them in on another layer >>;;; Everything is fabulous otherwise. ^^ Keep up the good work on skies, Mags! (and for keeping the floor clean from oil :P ) Can't wait to see what's next. =3
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:iconpsychic-girl:
RUN PINKY, HE'S GONNA BLOW CHUNKS! XD

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How cute he's got a nervous stomach. ^^ An all too common feeling for grooms.
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:) that i find a little cute

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:iconrabidleroy:
Poor Dos. I guess he's just getting marriage fright (a bit like stage fright, but before the actual wedding can take place.)

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:iconkconn12:
I wonder if Dos actually throws up on Pinkie's expensive veil.

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Is the concept of marriage still adequate after 800 years? Amongst robots?

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Why do you think he feels sick? :shrug:

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