Gah, Reggie's expressions again <3 Reggie does not like the idea of working with a partner, but he won't be prepared to what Zaphod has to say to him next.
EDIT: Fixed the typos in panel 2 and panel 6.
Art and storyline = =Fishlover Dialogue and Co written by = ~Volts48
Notes: Black and White: They're on the case, trying to find the murderer, work related, etc... Sequin: Flashback. There will be only one scene with this color. In Color: Off shift, where they're trying to learn about each other and other things. etc...
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Cover: It will lead you to the first page and prologue.
Lol I find this really funny and epic! I can't believe that Watchog is the Chief of Police and Audino is about to be acquainted as Beheeyem's partner. :3 Im laughing out loud at Beheeyem's expression as he gets a reaction to a skirt I gotta love Beheeyem's reaction = I can't wait to see Slip of the Gun: An Alien Caper page 11! I like the expreessions and that Beheeyem has a mouth And I love the style you used, like a comic book I see the vision as funny and serious, the originality of the pokemon is excellent, the techniques are awesome, and it has an impact on your story
i love how how reggie reacted! so funny! although, shouldn't Zaphod's gold name thingy be facing the other way? im sure that zaphod knows his own name LOL
I can't believe that Watchog is the Chief of Police and Audino is about to be acquainted as Beheeyem's partner. :3
Im laughing out loud at Beheeyem's expression as he gets a reaction to a skirt
I gotta love Beheeyem's reaction =
I can't wait to see Slip of the Gun: An Alien Caper page 11!
I like the expreessions and that Beheeyem has a mouth
And I love the style you used, like a comic book
I see the vision as funny and serious, the originality of the pokemon is excellent, the techniques are awesome, and it has an impact on your story
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