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Aloha Lei by =Fishlover:iconFishlover:

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Submitted: January 24, 2007
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Another pencil test animation. I wanted to scan this sooner but my teacher decided to be a pain and block people from using the scanner and Adobe Imageready, but i unblocked them *Ish a Mac geek*

Yeah I can see some mistakes, but what I really don't like is the pause before it switches scenes. I can see the mistakes with the arm sizes I can explain the pencil I was using was a very crappy one. Moody's head switches sizes on scene 3 after 625 puts the flower necklace around her neck, and the palm leaves on the hawaiian shirts may switch places or sizes. The necklace overlaps 625's shirt in one of the frames. ^^;

The fade in the end animation seems to make it looks a bit good, but that's just me. Looks "storyboard-ish." I like how i did the animation in different angles though.

Total frames: 30, but the drawing part of the animation only took 20 frames.

Moody © me
625 © disney
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~experiment749:iconexperiment749: Jan 24, 2007, 1:29:49 PM
Aw. n_n I love the little changes in perspective.

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~SocomStitch:iconSocomStitch: Jan 24, 2007, 2:31:33 PM
Cool, it change sides

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=Experiment900:iconExperiment900: Jan 24, 2007, 2:31:36 PM
MORE CRITIQUE FROM 900! Well, I love the concept and the changing screen views. Very nice touch. ^^ But I do admit you must ok on your erasings and such. It kind of shows out a lot.. :P You asked for detailed critique so..meh...I'm just picky.

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=Fishlover:iconFishlover: Jan 24, 2007, 2:35:45 PM
thanks! and the erasings, dangit! XD

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~bloostitchandangel:iconbloostitchandangel: Jan 24, 2007, 2:42:15 PM
Adorable Mags very cute!

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=Experiment900:iconExperiment900: Jan 24, 2007, 3:04:37 PM
:P

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~Sheeko636:iconSheeko636: Jan 24, 2007, 3:32:49 PM
Oh my gosh! That's so CUTE! ^^ Nice work on it! I must've taken a long time. I like the different angles too.
~donna626:icondonna626: Jan 24, 2007, 3:57:53 PM
thats soooooo cute!!! excelent job Mags! :hug:

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Mood: Love ~DalilaKitsune:iconDalilaKitsune: Jan 24, 2007, 4:23:54 PM
Aww that's so sweet! ^^ Awesome job
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